Odd Fiction: Bleak River

Hello, Guys! I'm back with another odd fiction to entertain (your stranded soul). This odd fiction might will have a part 2, we'll see. 

Enjoy... 😁


Bleak River

Last summer, I visited my aunt in the village for a vacation. On my last day there, we're having a little party. Me, my aunt, and my cousins.

The party was exciting, we played so many games and got intoxicated. I felt nausea, so I decided to go out for a stroll.

I went near the river, and sat on the river bank. I like it there, the fresh air and the breeze. Suddenly I saw something fell from the sky to the river, the freshwater splashed to my face. 

I had no idea what it was, but I'm sure it wasn't a shooting star 'cause the sky was so clear, the moon dwelled alone that night. My curiosity getting loud inside me. So, I took a few steps forward, I didn't know what I was expecting to find. I was just looking for anything near the river bank, I was too afraid to go further. 

But I kept going further, until I could feel the water was as high as my chest. I didn't stop, I didn't know why I kept going further, it was not right. I felt like something was calling my name on the other side.

It's my soul, who wanted to go further, as there was something big calling my soul to follow.

I kept going until I couldn't feel the cold, the wind, the water, the air, my body paralyzed, I felt nothing.

And I still feel nothing.


Moral story:

Don't separate from the pack!

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